How To Write
Instructions
Instructions are found in brochures, pamphlets, owners' manuals,
packing slips, on the back of credit card statements, and at the
bottom of invoices.
However, occasionally it is necessary to write a special letter
of instruction, most often in response to a customer query.
Well-written letters of instruction serve as both goodwill and
sales letters, so they should be looked on as a special opportunity
to increase customer loyalty rather than as a routine and
unimportant part of your correspondence.
Writing letters of Instructions would typically be for the
following situations:
- agreements/contracts/leases
- babysitters/daycare providers
- forms/applications/surveys
- house/plant/garden/pet care whu away
- new policies/procedures/regulations
- operating instructions: appliances/tools/equipment
- payments
- product registrations/use/care
- requests for instructions (see REQUESTS)
- return, repair, or replacement of merchandise
- samples
- shipping instructions
How to Say It
1. If your letter is a response to an earlier contact, mention
this ("Thank you for your letter asking . . ."). Otherwise, give
the reader an immediate reference point ("To help you get the most
out of your new software, we otter the following suggestions for
use."). 2. Number or otherwise set off the steps in your
instructions. 3. Tell the reader where they can go for further
help.
4. End with a pleasant statement of appreciation or with a mention
of future business or enjoyment of the new product.
What Not to Say
1. "Don't give instructions in the negative" is a negative
statement. "Word your instructions positively" is a positive one.
Use the positive form. Whenever you find "don't" and "never" and
"should not" in your instructions, rephrase the sentence to read
positively.
2. In giving instructions, avoid words like "simple" and
"obvious." Invariably, these words preface something that is
neither simple nor obvious to the other person, and they carry the
subtle sting of a put-down by implying that the instructions are
clear to everyone but the puzzled reader.
3. It seems superfluous to counsel against patronizing,
insulting, or condescending language, yet these attitudes sometimes
creep into letters of instruction. For example, many times a
"broken" appliance is simply not plugged in.
When compiling a list of troubleshooting instructions for
repair, the first step usually counsels users to check the outlet
to see if the appliance is plugged in. Instead of poking a little
sly fun at this kind of slip-up, phrase your instruction "matter of
factly."
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